Haunted

HAUNTED

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 Haunted by her love,
He lost his everything
Burning in revenge he,
 Destroyed his everything
           
    Haunted by her Memories,
      He hardly remembers anything
 Burning in rejection
 He hardly likes anything
                                              
Haunted by his passion
     World for him means nothing 
    Haunted by his Madness
        Everything except her,is nothing
                          
        He is still searching her in his blood,
          Where she is running like a poison 
            He is haunted by the Ghost of past,
         Where he lost his life's only reason 

- Deepbaazigar

Comments

  1. Ashish JoshiOctober 19, 2011 at 12:16 AM

    wow!

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  2. deepbaazigarOctober 19, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    Thanks Ashish

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  3. Saru SinghalOctober 19, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Awww, there are few lines which are so simple yet with a deep impact...Closing lines are superb...

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  4. deepbaazigarOctober 19, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Thanks SARU...
    That was not from heart..So is quite Mediocre :)

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  5. Cloud NineOctober 19, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    Amazing...so simple, yet brings out the emotions!

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  6. deepbaazigarOctober 19, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    Lol..Simplicity is because of my limited Vocabulary,nothing else :P

    Thanks 4 liking Cloud Nine

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  7. Alice Lynn AlfredOctober 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    How passionate and raw with emotion.....I am hoping you didn't have to go through this sort of torture that "love" can produce.....but usually great writing only can occur after great heartache...:>( Beautiful poetry, dear friend!!

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  8. deepbaazigarOctober 19, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    Thanks Alice :)

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  9. shvetaOctober 31, 2011 at 3:47 AM

    beautifully written!

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  10. deepbaazigarOctober 31, 2011 at 6:40 AM

    Thanks Shveta

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